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Final essay part 2 Voluntary military system can decrease waste of resource and money. Under conscription, there are two reasons why it wastes budget. First, too much personal resources are conscripted into army. Most of the soldiers conscripted into army are men aged between 20 and 22. If they work in society, a drastic social benefit would be made. In other words, a drastic social benefit disappeared because of conscription. Second, conscription makes excessive budget for army. For example, current army spends money on public service worker because they have too much personal resource. Under voluntary military service, army budget will be used for soldiers only. These two things shows that voluntary army system decrease waste of resource and money. Voluntary military system makes better soldiers. There are two reasons why it is true. First, they are voluntarily applied soldiers. It is obvious that a man who wanted to be a soldier will be better a soldier than a man who doesn’t. Some would argue that there is no evidence that conscripted soldiers has lower morale. However, the case of the Iraq Civil War tells the naked truth of the conscription. They had much more soldiers than ISIL, but one-fourth of conscripted army ran away as the war occurred. This means when a war begins, 150,000 soldiers of Korean army can desert. Second, soldiers under voluntary military service system are trained longer than current system’s soldiers. In sum, voluntary military system makes stronger soldiers because longer training and desire to be a soldier will make them upright. In conclusion, it is better to change conscription to voluntary army system for the following reasons: less barbaric, less waste of resource and money, stronger morale. As voluntary military system goes on, violence caused by conscription’s compulsiveness will be gone. Money for public service worker paid by army will be gone and personal resource that does not draft by army will make social benefits. Thus waste of army bill will be decrease. In addition, soldiers will have their own credo to be a soldier and have trained more. It’s obvious that these soldiers will be braver and stronger. See how voluntary military service would make army and society better. Face up the reality. It’s time to realize the absurdity of conscription.

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