Looking forward to my new life experience

I'm going to study in Califonia next year. I'll meet a lot of new friends,visit lots of famous places and find a busy part-time job.I'm so excited about all of these.That's a new life experience for me,but my parents are  very worried about me.Though I've traveled to Thailand and Maldives with my friends before,but I've never gone abroad alone.However,at least they support my choice. I'm so proud of my family.So,there is a very important thing before I'm go abroad,I need to improve my English skill.A friend who comes from NZ and also my English teacher in EF training agency told me that I need to pay attention to your writing,it's one of the hardest things,because you will have to write essays in English.It was a useful suggustion for me.I'm very glad to have a good friend  like him. Now I'm starting  to learn English,I hope someone can help me or  perhaps we can  help each other,improve together.

Looking forward to my new life experience

I'm going to study in Califonia next year, I'll meet a lot of new friends,visit lots of famous places and find a busy part-time job.I'm so excited about all of these.That's a new life experience for me, but my parents are very worried about me.Though I've traveled to Thai and Maldives with my friends before,but I've never gone abroad alone.However,at least they support my choice. I'm so proud of my family.So,there is a very important thing before I go aboard: improve my English skill.A friend who comes from NZ and also my English teacher in EF training agency told me to pay attention to your writing,it's one of the hardest thing because you will have to write essays in English.It was a useful suggustion for me.I'm very glad to have a good friend like him. Now I'm start to learn English. I hope someone can help me or let's help each other improve together.

>>>> You speak English well but you have too many commas. I can help you if you want to. Good luck! :)