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Football
Today I go would like to talk about football. Will this subject attract more people than the other one?
I don't know, but I want to talk about my team, Real Betis, it's (the use of it's shows possession. What you are trying to say is 'it is', which is abbreviated as 'its'. This is a very common mistake even amongst native English speakers) from Sevilla, in Spain. This year we play in the second division but we are the champions and we will go up to first division, La Liga. The next year we can play against Madrid, Barcelona and the most important one Sevilla, because we are eternal rivals. The match's week is a party and everybody is concerned. My team have has (team is treated as singular in English) this watchword "Manquepierda" that means even if we lose.
Also I love Premier League, it's (again, you need to use 'its' here because that is short for 'it is') the most competitive league in Europe. I like Liverpool since Rafa Benítez bring brought many Spanish players and won the Champion's League. I follow the principal teams, the strategies of Manchester Unted, City, Chelsea, ... In Spain the Chelsea's manager, José Mourinho, is hated for mostly by most people because his behavior was not aproppiate for Madrid. Football players from Betis has have (need to use plural here) come to Premier League, for example Adrian, West Ham's goalkeeper, or Cañas and Pozuelo, Swansea players the from last year.
This Saturday Barcelona won his it's ( here is when you can use 'it's' because Barcelona is the owner of the fifth title) fifth Champions League, four in the last ten years. The club have has had a big growth in the last year.
To finish the entry I want to public publish a photo of the fans in our stadium.
Overall very good job! Perhaps review the proper time to use 'it's' or 'its', but know that it is a very common mistake. And good luck to your team next year!
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