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Football Today I go to talk about football, will this subject attract more people than other one? I don't know, but I want to talk about my team, Real Betis, it's from Sevilla, in Spain. This year we play in the second division but we are the champions and we go up to first division, La Liga. The next year we can play against Madrid, Barcelona and the most important one Sevilla, we are eternal rivals. The match's week is a party and everybody is concerned. My team have this watchword "Manquepierda" that means even if we lose. Also i love Premier League, it's the most competitive league in Europe. I like Liverpool since Rafa Benítez bring many spanish player and won the Champions League. I follow the principal teams, the strategies of Manchester Unted, City, Chelsea, ... In Spain the Chelsea's manager, José Mourinho, is hated for mostly people because his behavior was not aproppiate for Madrid. Football players from Betis has come to Premier League, for example Adrian, West Ham's goalkeeper, or Cañas and Pozuelo, Swansea players the last year. This Saturday Barcelona won his fifth Champions League, four in the last ten years. The club have a big growth in the last year. To finish the entry I want to public a photo of the fans in our stadium.

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Football

Today I go would like to talk about football. Will this subject attract more people than the other one?

I don't know, but I want to talk about my team, Real Betis, it's (the use of it's shows possession. What you are trying to say is 'it is', which is abbreviated as 'its'. This is a very common mistake even amongst native English speakers) from Sevilla, in Spain. This year we play in the second division but we are the champions and we will go up to first division, La Liga. The next year we can play against Madrid, Barcelona and the most important one Sevilla, because we are eternal rivals. The match's week is a party and everybody is concerned. My team have has (team is treated as singular in English)  this watchword "Manquepierda" that means even if we lose.

Also I love Premier League, it's (again, you need to use 'its' here because that is short for 'it is') the most competitive league in Europe. I like Liverpool since Rafa Benítez bring brought many Spanish players and won the Champion's League. I follow the principal teams, the strategies of Manchester Unted, City, Chelsea, ... In Spain the Chelsea's manager, José Mourinho, is hated for mostly by most people because his behavior was not aproppiate for Madrid. Football players from Betis has have (need to use plural here) come to Premier League, for example Adrian, West Ham's goalkeeper, or Cañas and Pozuelo, Swansea players the  from last year.

This Saturday Barcelona won his it's ( here is when you can use 'it's' because Barcelona is the owner of the fifth title) fifth Champions League, four in the last ten years. The club have has had a big growth in the last year.

To finish the entry I want to public publish a photo of the fans in our stadium.

 

Overall very good job! Perhaps review the proper time to use 'it's' or 'its', but know that it is a very common mistake. And good luck to your team next year!

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Yes, I think that the perfect way to deal the TV rights is the Premier League's way. In United Kingdom won more money according your audience and your position in the table. In this way you can fight for the TV rights's money. For the next year in Spain we will have a very much equal model to repart, but Madrid and Barcelona will continue to have the principal quantity os money. Brazil have good young players but Europe teams can offers to him more money and tournaments like Copa América, makes that many players come to here. Why don't prefer stay in his country and make a better league?
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Here in Brazil, we have a league very competitive, because the teams are in the same economic situation or almost that. We had a institute, named 13's club, which congregate the contry's main teams. This organization was bargained the TV rights transmission for all members, trying make the better deal for each one. Nowadays, this organization has fell down, and each team has negociate by itself. So teams which had the bigger audience receive more money than others. This teams are Corinthians and Flamengo. I believe that will happen the same as happened in your country.
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Yea, you are right, the principal difference between Madrid, Barcelona and the others clubs of Spain is the money. In the last year each one won 139 millions of euros, and Atlético de Madrid, who won the league only won 41 millions for televisions. This make barcelona and Madrid biggest and biggest and for this reason they always won La Liga and fight for Champions League. At this time, teams like Atlético de Madrid, Sevilla and Valencia have a excellent level but they can't win the league. Denilson was the most expensive signing in the Spain league's history in that time. The team have any other players like Finidi or Alfonso. The next year we go to fight for be more known in the world again.
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Betis was a incredible team when Denilson was part of the team. The team was very competitive, and much more known in the world. I would want to know why Barcelona e Real Madrid are much better than others. May be that both receives more money from TV, to rights transmission.

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