I love my dog

I have a dog. His name is Hiru. I think the people would should look like the dogs. They don't have bad souls and they are a very good friends.

Everybody knows that to have a dog is a big responsibility because the dog is not a toy. A dog needs do to pee, to eat, and especially, needs a lot of love.

When my dog needs to go out in the morning, he comes to my bed and he wakes me!
Hiru knows when he has done the wrong thing and he tries apologize by being affectionate.

The Dogs are make lot of great company.

I like dogs, too! 

I Love My Dog
I have a dog, his name is Hiru. I think that people should take example from (their) dogs. They don´t have bad souls and they can be very good friends.

Everyone knows that to have a dog is a big responsibility, because a dog is not a toy. A dog especially needs love, and it also needs to *urinate and eat.

*Use the word, "urinate" in place of "pee" here, as "pee" is an informal word.

When my dog needs to go out in the morning, he comes to my bed and wakes me! Hiru knows when he has done wrong, so he tries to apologize by being affectionate. Dogs make terrific companions!

I love my dog

I have a dog, his name is Hiru. I think people should like dogs. They don´t have a bad soul and they are  very good friends.

Everybody knows that to have a dog is a big responsibility because dogs are not toys. A dog needs to pee, eat, and most of all needs a lot of love.

When my dog needs to go out in the morning he comes to my bed and he wakes me!
Hiru knows when he has done something wrong and he tries to apologize by being affectionate.

Dogs are good company.