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express my feelings（welcome to correct my mistakes~ thank you！！！） I have thought involved in finance.Due to it will give me a excellent material life so that I can obtain a Higher spiritual life.But I am not keen on finance. I prefer being a tour guide，starting my own enterprise something like that.it brings me the kind of freedom at least.On the contrary， Reality is not as simple as we thought .As long as a man lives，He must bear pressure.Some from parents' expectations，but much of the stress is within himself.Maybe I should calm to face them，and Keep positive thoughts in my daily life.

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express my feelings（welcome to correct my mistakes~ thank you！！！）

I have thought involved in finance.Due to about involving myself in finance because it will give me a an excellent material life so that I can obtain a Higher spiritual life.But I am not keen on finance. I would prefer being  to be a tour guide，starting  start my own enterprise or something like that. it It brings me the some kind of freedom at least. On the contrary， Rreality is not as simple as we thought .As long as a man lives，Hhe must bear pressure.Some from parents' expectations，but much of the stress is within himself. Maybe I should calm come to face them，and Kkeep positive thoughts in my daily life.


Hey, this is a good entry. A jhila said, make sure you do not capitalize after a comma. Otherwise I think your English is pretty good!
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express my feelings（welcome to correct my mistakes~ thank you！！！）

I have thought involved in finance. Due to  of involving myself in finance because it will give me a excellent material life a better life, so that I can obtain a Higher spiritual life. But I am not keen on finance. I prefer being a tour guide，starting my own enterprise or something like that. it -> It brings me the  some kind of freedom at least. On the contrary However, Rreality is not as simple as we thought .As long as a man lives，Hhe must bear pressure. Some from parents' expectations，but much of the stress is within from himself. Maybe I should be calm to face facing them，and Kkeep positive thoughts in my daily life.

hi ^^ i think it's a good entry, you just have to avoid capitalizing letters after the comma (,) :) good job!
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sure,I'm glad to..
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I am very happy to see you and meet you .....I want to make fiend with you ,can i ??

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