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Practice... こんばは! A few sentences in order to practice japanese sentence structures. Please correct them and answer my questions! どうもありがとうございます! 一) 私の、公園に行った友達は、そこでお弁当をたべた。  My friend, who went to the park, ate a bento box there. (Where exactly do I have to put the「私の」?) 二) 明日には何をするか。 What will you do tomorrow? 三) ミュンスターにあるうちに、今日私は行った。 Today I went to my flat which is located in Münster. 四) 私は、友達からミュンスターへ行って、うちにかえった。 I drove from my friend's home towards Münster and then came back home. 五) レストランには寿司がある、私が好きだ。 I like the restaurants where I can get sushi. Those were my first tries of more complicated sentences, so don't be too mean, I'm a very beginner :s

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Practice...

こんばんは! A few sentences in order to practice japanese sentence structures. Please correct them and answer my questions! よろしくお願いします!


一) 私の、公園に行った友達は、そこでお弁当をたべた。「公園に行った私の友達は、そこでお弁当をたべた。」sounds a bit more natural for me. 
My friend, who went to the park, ate a bento box there.
(Where exactly do I have to put the「私の」?)

二) 明日には何をしますか。or 何をするの。 
What will you do tomorrow?


三) ミュンスターにあるうちor私のアパートに、今日私は行った。
Today I went to my flat which is located in Münster.

四) 私は、友達の家からミュンスターへ行って、うちにかえった。
I drove from my friend's home towards Münster and then came back home.

五) 私は寿司が食べられるレストランが好きだ。
I like the restaurants where I can get sushi.


Those were my first tries of more complicated sentences, so don't be too mean, I'm a very beginner :s

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Hi! I'm only a beginner in Japanese, but I think that you wrote your Japanese good so far. I'm not 100% sure though (hopefully a native speaker will check). If you're up for it, feel free to message me about practicing Japanese. Even if it's only beginners Japanese, I think that it would be good for practice/faster learning. Good luck! ありがとうございます!

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