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Home - Sweet Home
It has been 01 one ('1' could also be used, the '0' is simply not necessary) week since I temporarily stopped writing in my notebook on Italki. I had to prepare for my trip to Vietnam trip and I did not have enough free time, even for reading notifications.
I am in Hanoi now. The weather is hot and humid. There has been some rains but the temperature is still over 38 degrees. The traffic in Hanoi still drives me crazy as usual with lots of traffic jams and people driving dangerously. However, those chore things cannot make me feel less-excited when I get home. --I'm having a hard time understanding this part. I think the word 'chore' is making the sentance difficult to follow. If you are trying to say that the heat, humidity and poor drivers are not making you any less excited to be home, try: "However, those minor things don't make me less excited to be home", or "dispite those minor things, I am still very excited to be home."
I met my family after 01 one year working abroad and nothing is more precious than that.
My elder sister gave birth to a girl last month. She is an angel with cute smile and dimpled cheek. I love her so much. I could not stay far away from her for even just 15 minutes :)
My mother cooks lots of delicious dishes for me. I am sure assure there is no chief in the world could make me enjoy my meal as much as she does her. She is a super-chief in my heart, she is always on my mind and always is.
Hanoi welcomed me with by its stunning beauty in June. I wandered to Hoan Kiem Lake and took take some picture in the Old Quarter, and listened to sweet songs written about Hanoi. My heart seemed to be melting. It's time to come back. Home is always the best place when you are tired :)
Thanks for reading and correcting it. Have Wish you a nice day!
Sounds like a wonderful trip. I hope this was helpful! :)
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