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My day :'D
Today I woke up to the at 6:50 AM and went to the school.
In the At school, I play with my friends in the break time and pay attention to the teacher when I was am in class.
In the afternoon, I went to my violin class and then I went with my mom to some stores.
Now, I'm writing here and I'm watching anime.
Sorry for my poor English (UnU)
My Day :'D
Today I woke up to the at 6:50 a.m. and went to the school.
In the At school, I played with my friends in the during break time and pay paid attention to the teacher when I was in class.
In the afternoon I went to my violin class and then I went with my mom to some stores.
Now I'm writing here and (I'm) watching anime.
Sorry for my poor English (UnU)
Great effort!
"Played" and "paid" are past tense - you should use those since you are talking about what happened before. You did this very well by using "went" (instead of saying "I go"). Keep practicing!
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