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Who I am
My full name is Lyounsi Abdo. I'm (you could use "I'm" or "I am" here) from Morocco, a beautifuul country, and I am 22 years old. I was born on May second (or "May 2nd"), 1993 (note: you can say "one thousand nine hundred ninety three" [mostly used formally], but most people would write "1993" and say aloud "nineteen ninety-three"). I am in college, i studying law, and i dreaming of being a lawyer.
I like swimming, and reading books, and watching a romance films.
I have 2 brothers and one beautiufull sister. I love them very much. My mother doesn't works, and my father works in the field of cinema. so This is me and my family.
Remember when you use proper nouns (like Lyounsi and Morocco) to capitalize the first letter, and also when you begin a new sentence. Capitalization in English is often difficult. Here is a quick reference: http://libraryonline.com/?pID=48
You're doing well with English so far. Keep it up! My best friend also dreams of being a lawyer!
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