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Pollution in developing city Since the dawn of 21st century, it seems pollution is an unavoidable consequence cause by countries' development .whether it can be prevented has been a hot debated issue recently. It is essential to elaborate the both side before jump to my conclusion. It may be true that the severe air pollution cannot be avoided in developing city .This is mainly because construct new buildings produce a vast number of toxic materials such as carbon dioxide and dust. In addition, to deal with the constructed disposal ,the fast way is incinerate them all, which also emits a host number of harmful materials into air . furthermore, noisy pollution , another serious issue that mankind are facing nowadays, is linked to an increasing number of populations and vehicles appear .suffering long terms in noisy environment damage human-being’s hearing system and emotional function. Thus, that explains why more and more urban citizens are easier getting insomnia, depression and irritation when they living in developing city. Perhaps, there are some methods are capable of preventing the pollution occur, To start with, relating authorities should encourage constructor use less plastic and bubble constructed materials. To avoid the harmful gas they release into oxygen when disposing them after used. Moreover, Tree plantation may be also a good way decline noisy pollution. To illustrate, the natural mechanism within trees can absorb and block the noisy transmit to urban dwelling. Therefore, trees can greatly reduce noisy pollution into lower level. To sum up, Pollution is an unavoidable fact for big city as its development demand. Seeking an alternative measure to tackle this thorny issue may become more important in the future. In my opinion, it is necessary that government come up a policy while individual take action to improve this problem.

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Pollution in developing city

Since the dawn of 21st century, it seems pollution is an unavoidable consequence caused by countries' development. Whether it can be prevented has been a recently hot debated issue. It is essential to elaborate both sides before I jump to my conclusion.
It may be true that severe air pollution cannot be avoided in developing cities .This is mainly because of the construction of new buildings that produce a vast number of toxic materials such as carbon dioxide and dust. In addition, to deal with constructed disposal, the fast way is incinerate them all, which also emits a host number of harmful materials into the air. Furthermore, noisy pollution, another serious issue that mankind is facing nowadays, is linked to an increasing number of populations with an increase in the amount of vehicles appearing. Noisy environments may cause long-term suffering and damage to a human-being’s hearing system and emotional function. Thus, this explains why more and more urban citizens are more easily prone to insomnia, depression and irritation when they live in developing cities.
Perhaps, there are some methods capable of preventing the pollution. To start with, relating authorities should encourage constructors to use less plastic and bubble materials to avoid the harmful gas they release into oxygen when disposing them after being used. Moreover, tree-plantation may be also a good way decrease noisy pollution. To illustrate, the natural mechanism within trees can absorb and block noisy transmissions in urban dwellings. Therefore, trees can greatly reduce noisy pollution to lower levels.
To sum up, Pollution is an unavoidable consequence for big cities due to the development demand. Seeking an alternative measure to tackle this thorny issue may become more important in the future. In my opinion, it is necessary that governments come up with policies while individuals take action to improve this problem.

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