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What I liked most about your chapter was your description of ‘El Saler’. Surely anybody would like to visit all the variety of beaches with the onset of spring and the milder weather because in summer it’s too crowd.
Another place I liked was the city centre, surrounded by ancient and historic buildings. It would be nice to add some information about modern buildings as well.
About the parking in the city centre, it’s fairly difficult to leave the cars there before 2 pm so I reckon that you should recommend people to get on by others means of transport.
Don’t forget to change the museum schedule. They open from 10 am to 7 pm!
In addition, I’d suggest include information about nightlife. Ruzafa’s pubs are a good choice to enjoy and meet people.
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Writing a letter
What I liked most about your chapter was your description of ‘El Saler’. Surely anybody would like to visit all the variety of beaches with the onset of spring and the milder weather because in summer it’s too crowded.
Another place I liked was the city centre, surrounded by ancient and historic buildings. It would be nice to add some information about modern buildings as well.
About the parking in the city centre, it’s fairly difficult to leave the cars there before 2 pm so I reckon that you should recommend people to get on by other means of transport.
Don’t forget to change the museum schedule. They open from 10 am to 7 pm!
In addition, I’d suggest including/that you include information about nightlife. Ruzafa’s pubs are a good choice to enjoy and meet people.
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Irene, are you really preparing for the FCE? I believe you're ready for the CAE right now—and perhaps in a year you could go straight for the CPE.
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