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My First Entry. or My Story! or My first time to write a story.
Hello, my name is Lana. This is my first time I'm writing a notes in English after so many years (I will be writing notes). For this first notes, I would like to share my feelings that I have been keeping for years. I used to be naughty and a friendly kid when I was in primary school. And I admit, my English was pretty good back then because I studied in an International school. I came from a good family background. Since I was the only girl in all my siblings (4 brothers). My mom was kind of worried about me (my attitude, and behavior). I used to behave like a boy as I was surrounded with guys. Because of this, after my primary school, my mom sent me to boarding school for girls only (no boys) to continue my secondary school.
The challenge started when I first walked into the room for student. or classroom. To be continued..
(1) Right now you are just writing this note so it will be singular.
(2) "I" meaning "me" is always a capital letter.
(3) Never use “kinda”, "gonna", "wanna" in writing because these are informal contractions. That means that we do not use them in "correct" speech, we almost never use them in writing.
(4) Your English is damn good, Keep up the good work! n Good luck!
My First writing story.
Hello, my name is Lana. This is my first time writing notes in English after so many years. For these first notes, I would like to share my feelings that I have been keeping for years. I used to be a naughty, friendly kid when I was in primary school. And I admit, my English was pretty good back then because I studied in International school. I came from a good family background. Since I was the only girl in my siblings (4 brothers), my mom was kinda worried about me (my attitude, behavior). I behaved like a boy as I was surrounded by guys. Because of this , after my primary school, my mom sent me to boarding school for girls only (no boys) to continue my secondary school.
The challenge started when I walked into the room provided for the students. To be continued..
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