The Country I would Most Like to Visit

If someone asked (somebody ask) me where 'would you most like to travel to?', (I would like to discover,) I would (will) answer without hesitation (hesiation) 'Italy!' (that is Italia.) Modern Italy has evolved from an ancient civilisation. (Italia is an archaic country.) It is blessed with (There are) many gorgeous beaches, art treasures, trendy fashions and amazing landscapes. Moreover, if you had ever tried a pasta, a cappuccino (capuccino) or an ice cream then you would know how fantastic (fanstatic the) Italian food and drink tastes. (is.) Just supposing (Suppose that) I had the (an) opportunity to visit there, the first (one) thing I would do (first) is sample (trying) some great Italian wines and taste an authentic Italian pizza. (a real pizza there.) Afterwards, I would take a trip to the Leaning Tower of Pisa (Pisa tower) and discover every nook and cranny in that famous tower. Not forgetting Venice! 'How could I ever (Moreover, I would not) miss the (a) chance to visit that amazing city?' (Venice,) I would spend hours taking (take a) gondola rides everywhere, (all aver the place,) day-dreaming as I cruised along the romantic canals. (river.) All in all, (altoghether,) I know if I had the (have an) opportunity to visit Italy (I Italia), I would (will) enjoy every moment of my stay there.

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The Country I would Like to Visit

If somebody ask me where I would like to travel, I will answer Italia without hesiation.

Italia is an archaic country. There are many gorgeous beaches, art treasures, trendy fashions, and amazing landscapes. 

Alternative: Italia is an archaic country with many gorgeous beaches, art treasures, trendy fashions, and amazing landscapes.  

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If you had ever tried a pasta, a capuccino, or an ice cream then you would know how fanstatic the Italian foods are.

Suppose that I had an opportunity to visit Italia, one thing I would do first is trying some great wines and a real pizza there. Afterwards, I would take a trip to Pisa tower and discover every nook and cranny in that famous tower. Moreover, I would not miss a chance to visit Venice, I would take a gondola all aver the place, day-dreaming along the romantic river. Altoghether, if I have an opportunity to visit Italia, I will enjoy every moment during my stay in Italia.