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About me My name is zoe ,Came from China,i found this webside from my friends who's english is good in my mind.I hope i can make a big progress in here,if i have somewords,spellingor grammer wrong.please pick it out .and i will thank you very much. OK.lets talk about things near around me (even though i have no idea to write what still i saw the creen reminds me and give me some topic ...)How about my nearest traveling experience?that was last week.my company organized a meeting in Yunnan and invite all over the country stuffs ,witch province have about 5-10,We take plane went to a bonder,there have a small town and product thePuer Tea,wich is very famous in China.and there have 4 minority.We eat the tipically food and sing the local songs.drink teas.and climb the primeval forest,it have3,500m high, when we climb the forest start ranining and fogging because of the sushine before days ,it was beautiful . seems to get in AVATAR .Last we climb to the top and see a old tea tree who have more than 3200years old .The old tree ,wet road,and the beautiful scene i will never forget that .. Last i will put on the picture when the fog fullfill the forest !

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About me

My name is Zoe, and I am Came from China. I found this website from my friends whose english is good in my mindopinion. I hope i can make a big lot of progress in here. If i have some words, spelling or grammer wrong mistakes, please pick point it out, and I will be very thankful. you very much.
OK. Lets talk about things near around about me (even though I have no idea what to write about what still i saw the creen reminds me and give me some topic ...). How about my nearest recent travelling experience? This was from last week. My company organized a meeting in Yunnan province and invited us from all over the country stuffswitch (each province have about 5-10 staff). We take took a plane and went to a the border, where there have was a small town and product which produces the Puer(?) Tea. wichIt is a very famous product in China, and there have are 4 minority(specialities/types?). We eat the tipically local food and sang the local songs, drank tea, and climbed to the primeaval forest. It was 3,500m high, and when we climbed the forest it started ranining and fogging because of the recent sushine before days, but it was very beautiful. It seemed to get in we were in the movie AVATAR. Lastly we climbed to the top and saw an old tea tree who have was more than 3200 years old. The old tree, wet road, and the beautiful scenery I will never forget that ...
Lastly I will put on upload the a picture when of the fog fullfill filling the forest!

 

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Well done, I really enjoyed reading about your travel experiences.

Just be careful of spaces ' ' after full stops '.' and commas ','.

Also be careful of the pronoun 'I'. It must always be capitalised! ('i' -> 'I')

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