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Coucou!
Récemment, j’ai couru mon premier trail concours (in case you want to keep this idea of competition, I would say ma première course de trail but I'm not sure about this, I don't really know how people in this kind of sport would say ;)). C’était 11,6 kilomètres. (Here you could say j'ai couru mon premier trail de 11,6 kilomètres, it shorter and more fluid to learn or read)
La première moitié était très fatigante parce que nous avons dû monter une montagne en courant. Je n’ai pas l’habitude de monter en courant. Pendant l’entraînement, j’ai couru je cours seulement en terrain plat. (here the present will show the fact you do it every day (or week), whereas the participe passé ai couru would be that you have been running one time)
La deuxième moitié était plus facile, car il a descendu c'était en descente/cela descendait (this a solution but you can say it differently, but here remember il is for persons, no things). Il y a (I don't know what you wanted to say here) but maybe you wanted to say "then" and it would be Ainsi, j’ai pu rattraper un peu de temps.
Maintenant, je m’entraine pour mon premier semi-marathon en octobre. Ce sera un trail concours aussi.
I hope it will be helpful.
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