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Brief text about how time goes on (please, I need help with this text!) As time goes on, life is more comfortable thanks to improvements of all kinds. Throughout last hundred years, we can find innovations in healthy, entertainment, search of information, means of transport and so on. As for health, one of the most remarkable hits happened in the last century was the discovery of penicillin, which has been very helpful for infectious diseases. Another field in which medicine has made great progress is organ transplantation. In the last decades, it has done heart transplants or bone marrow transplants. A proof of this better level in healthy is that life expectancy has increased until hundred years in some countries. On the other side, it has had changes in our way of entertainment as well. For instance, the invention of television was in the fifties, but today almost all families have one in the living room. However, if something has changed life recently, this has been Internet. Today we can find information on the Internet very quick, whereas before we used to spend a lot of time with books. Nonetheless, Internet has many more uses, for example, people do shopping or write letters on the Internet. To summarise, the times change and today life is better because people live more years, it has appeared new ways to pass time and Internet has made easier some tasks.

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Brief text about how time goes on (please, I need help with this text!)

As time goes on, life becomes/gets more and more comfortable thanks to improvements of all kinds. Throughout the past century we can find innovations in healthcare, entertainment, search for information, means of transportation and so on.

In the field of health one of the most remarkable achievements of the the last century was the discovery of penicillin, which has been very helpful to cure infectious diseases. Another field in which medicine has made great progress is organ transplantation. In the last decades, it has made possible heart transplants or bone marrow transplants. A proof of this better level in healthcare is that life expectancy has increased up to a hundred years in some countries.

There have been changes in the way we entertain ourselves as well. For instance, the invention and diffusion of television, which took place in the fifties, but today almost all families have one in the living room.

However, if something has changed life recently, this has been the Internet. Today we can find information on the Internet very quickly, whereas before we used to spend a lot of time with books. Nonetheless, Internet has many more uses, for example, people do shopping or write letters on the Internet.

To summarise, times change and today life is better than yesterday because people live more years,  have appeared new ways to pass time and Internet has made easier some tasks.

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Brief text about how time goes on (please, I need help with this text!)

As time goes on, life is more comfortable thanks to improvements of all kinds. Throughout last hundred years, we can find innovations in healthy, entertainment, search of information, means of transport and so on.

As for health, one of the most remarkable hits (things? discoveries?) happened in the last century was the discovery of penicillin, which has been very helpful for infectious diseases. Another field in which medicine has made great progress is organ transplantation. In the last decades, it has done heart transplants or bone marrow transplants. A proof of this better level in healthy is that life expectancy has increased until (to) hundred years in some countries.

On the other side, it has had changes in our way of entertainment as well. For instance, the invention of television was in the fifties, but today almost all families have one in the living room.

However, if something has changed life recently, this has been (it is the) Internet. Today we can find information on the Internet very quickly, whereas before we used to spend a lot of time with books. Nonetheless, Internet has many more uses, for example, people do shopping or write letters on the Internet.

To summarise, the times change and today life is better because people live more years, it has appeared new ways to pass time and Internet has made easier some tasks.

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