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Hi, I'm Alex... I'm 22 and from Venezuela. Since I was a child, I've loved english. I found myself talking alone saying nonsense things pretending that it was english, xD or listening to any song in english and singing to it saying completely different things. xD But Anyway, when I was 16 I decided to learn english and I did it. When I was almost 18 I was able to speak it in at a decent level... Although now I have like 4 years with no practice at all, so I want to re-learn (and be better than before)
One of my goals is to go to the USA. Since my childhood I've wanted to go there, and after watching cartoons at that time which mostly belong there, and watching the characters talking about dollars and blah blah, or when I played at any videogame at that time, characters only spoke in american english, and I loved it... It was like my surroundings were making my wish stronger and stronger... So I decided to take the dream and make it a goal. I'd like to know mainly LA and Miami (not sure what you were trying to say here), and despite this I need to do more things. One of them is to learn to communicate in english well. In fact, I want to reach a native level... I LOVE HOW AMERICAN ENGLISH SOUNDS... So, if you guys would like to help me I'd really appreciate it
A cambio, puedo ayudar con el español a quien este interesado en aprender mi idioma ^.^
That's it for now, see you!
PD (Ps). If you see any mistake in this text, please, let me know. This way, I can improve. Thanks!
Great job, this is very well written! I recomend you look into something called a "comma splice". This is basically just using too many commas while writting and creating a run on sentence. Other than that you did a very good job! keep up the good work!
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