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A formal Email From: María To: Lara Subject: Information about courses Dear Madam, I am writing to ask for information about your Golf lessons in Florida. I am interesting in an intensive course of two weeks. I am 25 and I work in Call Center. I like this Sport and I want practise it. I have looked at your website, but there is no information about intensive courses next summer. Could you please send me information about dates and price? I would also like some information about the levels that have it and how to know the level that I have, and finaly I would also like some information about accommodation. I look forward to hearing from you, Yours faithfully. María

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A formal Email

From: María
To: Lara
Subject: Information about courses

Dear Madam,

I am writing to ask for information about your Golf lessons in Florida. I am interesting interested in an intensive two week course of two weeks. I am 25 and I work in Call Center. (If this is a formal email to someone you are not familar with I would not put this sentence in, it does not fit the subject you are writing about) I like this Sport and I want practise practice it.

I have looked at your website, but there is no information about next summer's intensive courses. intensive courses next summer. Could you please send me information about dates and prices? I would also like some information about the skill levels offered that have it and how to know the level that I am currently have, and finaly I would also like some information about hotel accommodation.

I look forward to hearing from you,

Yours faithfully sincerely,

María

María,

Good job! The small changes in the order of words I suggested should make your email sound like it's from a native. You are doing very well. I always knew what you wanted to say, that is fantastic! Keep up the good work. 

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A formal Email

From: María
To: Lara
Subject: Information about courses

Dear Madam,

I am writing to ask for information about your Golf lessons in Florida. I am interesting interested (when you want to descibe a situation, it used a finish -ing adjective, however, if you want to use an adjective to describe an emotional state, this, usually ends in -ed) in an intensive course of two weeks. I am 25 and I work in Call Center. I like this Sport and I want practise practice it. 

I have looked at your website, but there is no information about intensive courses next summer next summer's intensive courses. Could you please send me information about dates and price prices? I would also like some information about the different skill levels  offered that have it and how to know the level that I'm have currently, and finaly finally I would also like some information about accommodation.

I look forward to hearing from you,

Yours faithfully. 

María.


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