Lazy Day
Today I don't want to do anything.I just want to laying my bed and eat more some strawberry ice cream !everybody should stay away from me!
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Hi
Nice post! I felt the same way today.
I've made a couple of corrections below, basically be aware, that you're talking in the past tense (as you're reflecting on the day).
Today I didn't want to do anything. I just wanted to lie in my bed, and eat some strawberry ice cream! Everybody should stay away from me!
In terms of readability, an alternative way of writing what you wrote, is this:
I didn't want to do anything today. All I wanted to do was lie in bed, and eat lots of strawberry ice cream! Everyone should stay away from me!
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Lazy Day
Today I don't want to do anything.I just want to lie on my bed and eat more some strawberry ice cream !everybody should stay away from me!
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