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My first time
Hello.
It was a great day for me yesterday. I finally got a job after a long time of searching for one.
It will be a whole/a totally new experience for me as I have never worked in this field before.
I am only a little sad because, this summer, I won't (will not) be able to spend much time with my children.
I very much hope that I will be able to impove my English through Italki. In my new job I need to speak English, too but sometimes I have some problems expressing myself. Thus, I will try to write something every day, so that you will get to know me better. And I hope (here you could say "wish" insted of "hope" so that you avoid being repetitive) that there will be people who will correct my imperfect English.
That was a sweet entry! Break a leg Victoira! :-)
my firts time
hello, yesterday for me was a great day. After a long time I have finally found a work. For me it will be a new experience because I have never worked in this area. I am only a little sad because I won't be able to spend this summer with my children. I hope very much that this website could help me to improve my English. In my new work I need to speak this language and sometimes I have some problem to explain what I want to say. So, I will try to write something every day, so that you will know me better. And I hope that sometimes somebody could correct my not so perfect English
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