Could anybody correct it? Thanks!

Informal email to a friend.


Dear Sue,
I am really happy to hear from you. It's a good idea to come and visit me. I can put you up as there is lot of room in my home.
You can easily get here by train from the Central Station. Trains leave every thirty minutes and the journey takes twenty minutes  to the Local Station then you will have to walk for five minutes to get my place.
Regarding the hotel, You could stay with me as it would be a pleasure for me to put you up for a couple of days.
In addition, you could pop into the Medieval Castle which is in the downtown area and we could have a lovely picnic in one of the biggest parks that my town has.
It would be better idea to wear shorts and T-shirts in July as it will be warm but you might want to bring a rain coat in case of bad weather.
Let me know if there is anything else you would like to know.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Loads of love,
Paola.