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Ban on Plastic Bags We use a lot of plastic bags all day. Especially in the eating culture of Taiwan, whether snacks or bubble tea, are provided with plastic bags to help us for use. If one person at least use two plastic bags in one day, then fifty people would use one hundred plastic bags. It is astonishing of the number. I think the government should ban or reduce plastic bags to safeguard our living environment in the future. Plastic bags should be banned for causing air pollution problems due to the incineration. The earth has been damaged because of the convenience for humans nowadays. Humans should start from small places. As long as human beings are willing to pay for it, the time that humans can survive on the earth will become longer. According to the results of Time magazine named "Top 50 Worst Inventions", plastic bags were also on the list. It can be seen that even plastic bags are convenient, the impact on the environment is very large. There's a no plastic bag campaign day held regularly by the environment groups in Hong Kong since 2006, they encourage the citizens to reduce the use of plastic bags. Some countries even start to impose the taxes on plastic bags in order to achieve the reduction of using plastic bags. I think we can use paper bags or reusable shopping bags to replace plastic bags to reduce the harm to the earth, as well as to the sustainable development of the planet.

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Ban on Plastic Bags

We use a lot of plastic bags all day. Especially in the eating culture of Taiwan, whether snacks or bubble tea, are provided with plastic bags  to help us to for use. (easy to use) If one person at least use two plastic bags in one day, so then fifty people would use one hundred plastic bags. It is an astonishing of the number. I think the government should ban or reduce plastic bags to protect environment which we are going to live in safeguard our living environment in the future.

Plastic bags should be banned because of for causing air pollution problems due to the incineration. The earth has been damaged because of the convenience for humans nowadays. Humans should start with a small step from small places. As long as human beings are willing to pay for it, the time that humans can survive on the earth will become longer.


plastic bags were also on the list of Time magazine named "Top 50 Worst Inventions"

Eventhough plastic bags are conveniet, the impact on the environment is very large.

There hasn't been anti plastic bag campaign held There's a no plastic bag campaign day held regularly by the environment groups in Hong Kong since 2006, they encourage the citizens to reduce the use of plastic bags. Some countries even start to impose the taxes on plastic bags in order to reduceachieve the reduction of using plastic bags  usag. I think we can use paper bags or reusable shopping bags to replace plastic bags to reduce the harm to the earth, as well as to the sustainable development of the planet.

 

Very good and long enough :-)

Italic parts should be rephrased I think.

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