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I am a Chinese girl, hope to know more friends, like travel, food, music, reading, shopping, of course, also like the handsome boy, ha ha.
Can you be my English teacher, my pleasure
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The My First essay Journal
I am a Chinese girl. I hope to know meet more friends, like travel, eat new food, listen to more music, reading more books, shopping more. Of course, also like the handsome boys, ha ha.
Can you be my English teacher? my pleasure It would make me happy.
(我的笔记:
我猜一点点你的翻译。你应该学英文学得多。)
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Dear Kitty:really?aha, I love that
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Thank you
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My First Journal
I am a Chinese girl. I hope to meet more friends, like travel, eat new food, listen to more music, read some books, shop more. Of course, also like the handsome boys, ha ha.
Can you be my English teacher? my pleasure It would make me happy!
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There is nothing wrong with using short sentences.
" I am a Chinese girl. I hope to meet new people (though not a complete thought - maybe add "here"). I like to travel. I like food, music, reading, shopping and of course a handsome boy, ha ha"
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