i love music

its an essay,but its not a formal one,ijust want to write what iam thinking now :)
after all,its my first eassy here.
Then again.i love music very much,especially country music. it makes me feel free and comfortable to live in the moment.
in my view.life gets better with music. whenever it is and wherever we are,as long as the companying of music,it seems everything will be fabulous.and its ture.
when i feel upset ,i like listening music to feel the music world,and get the common sense with the singers,and when i feel amused,ialso like do the same thing.
we can think of many things which ignored in the real world but can be picked up in the music world.
idont have favorite singers or bands,ijust like great works.
my favorite two songs are <she will be loved> and <mondo bongo>
thats all

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:)