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I went to visit a sick friend.
I finished college at 1 pm to go visit a friend who had recently had his appendix removed.
When I arrived at his house we spoke about his surgery. He was still in a lot of pain and knew he would miss out on many things for a while e.g. beer, pizza, burgers etc. but he still had a good attitude about everything. In the end he laughed at me because I haven't had that type of surgery yet.
So this is my first entry in italki, I would be happy to receive any advice you can give me.
I visited a sick friend.
i got out the college at 1 pm, to saw a friend who had a sergury, the sergury was appendicitis.
when i arrive at his house, we talked about his sergury, for the pain he had and the a lots of thing he wanna miss for a while, for example the beer, pizza, burgers, but he had a good attitude. in the end he laugthed at me because i don´t had that sergury wet.
so this is my first entry in italki, i will take all advice you gift me.
I visited a sick friend.
i got out of college at 1 pm, to see a friend who had surgery. The surgery was appendicitis.
When i arrived at his house, we talked about his surgery. He had was going through a lot of pain and tnere were a lot of things he was going to miss for a while. For example, beer, pizza, and burgers, but he had a good attitude about it. In the end he laughed at me because (I'm not sure what you were trying to say here, the highlighted part above)
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