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In the past Last January i I start my trip in returned to my home town of Concepción, a city in the central-south south-central area of Chile in Southamerica South America. I took a plane to Santiago which is the capital city of Chile. When i I was waiting for my next flight in the SCL airport, i I met with an old friend than who i I hadn't seen for like a 5 years and we had to take took the same flight to Atlanta. In the Atlanta's airport we did had a 2 hours stop layover and we took different flights,.  my My friend flew to Seattle and i I flew to New York. In NY, i did I had a 12 hour stop layover,. because Because of that i I left the airport and i I went to the city for a few hours. I took the subway in Jamaica station to Penn station. There was It felt very cold for to me because in Chile we were in Summer in that date it was summer at that time and the winters doesn't are aren't so cold. In Manhattan, i I went to do did some shopping, ate some 99c pizza, walked to the Times Square and Central Park, climbed to the Rockefeller Center to take some pictures, and then come back returned to the JFK airport to take the plane to Paris.

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TRIP1

Last January I started  my trip in my home town Concepción, a city in the central-south of Chile South America. I took a plane to Santiago the capital city of Chile. When I was waiting for my next flight in the SCL airport, I met with an old friend that I hadn't seen for about 5 years and we had to take the same flight to Atlanta. In Atlanta airport we had  a 2 hour stopover and we took different flights, my friend to Seattle and I to New York. In NY I had a twelve  hour stopover , and so I left the airport and I went to the city for a few hours. I took the subway from Jamaica station to Penn station. It  was very cold for me because in Chile we were in Summer in that date and the winters aren't  so cold. In Manhattan I went to do some shopping, ate some 99c pizza, walked to Time Square, Central Park, climbed to the Rockefeller Center to take some pictures and then went back to the JFK to take the plane to Paris.

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In the past January i start my trip in my home town Concepción, a city in the central-south of Chile Southamerica.

I started my from my hometown....,which is..., in the last January 

I took a plane to Santiago the capital city of Chile. When i was waiting for my next flight in the SCL airport, i met with an old friend that than i haven't hadn't seen for like a 5 years and we had to take the same flight to Atlanta. In the Atlanta's airport we did a 2 hours stop and we took different flights, my friend to Seattle and i to New York. In NY i did a 12 hour stop, because of that i left the airport and i went to the city for a few hours. I took the subway in Jamaica station to Penn station. There was very cold for me because in Chile we were in Summer in that date and the winters doesn't are so cold. In Manhattan i went to do some shopping, ate some 99c pizza, walked to the Time Square, Central Park, climbed to the Rockefeller Center to take some picture and then come back to the JFK to take the plane to Paris.