First attempt of writting

Hi, my future, darling friend! I very really want to learn English and I'm ready! But men please don't write to me because I'm married! I only talk with girls! Men, please don't bother me! ;)

Hello,

A nice informal introduction to yourself, just a few small mistakes.

It is a very common mistake to say 'I very like...' and other similar phrases. The best way to do this is to use 'really' instead of 'very'.

When we use 'I' to talk about me, it is always a capital (big) 'I'

When you describe a state - ready, married - you should use the verb 'be'

Hope this helps

First attempt of writting

Hi my future darling friend! I'm really want to learn English and i ready! But don't write to me men because i'm married! I talk only with girls! Men please don't bother me! ;)

First attempt of writting

Hi my future darling friend! I really want to learn English and i ready! But don't write me men because i am married! I talk only with girls! Men please don't bother me! ;)

First attempt of writting

Hi my future darling friends! I really want to learn English! Men, please don't write to me because I am married! I only want to talk with girls! Men, please don't bother me! ;)