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150521 - 在西安打字的自己:中国的火车 你好朋友们!我这次在西安给你们写打字的自己 (我今天没有纸!) 今天我要告诉你我在中文火车的经验。昨天我们座了火车去西安,一共一个十一小时张的旅游。 我被中国的火车站总是很震惊!中国的火车站比英国的火车站了不起大!总是有非常多的人不过它们很好条畅。 昨天我和我女朋友来了成都的火车站一点儿早因为我们听说了你经常必须排队。不过我们惊奇了因为我们可以捡我们的票很快。 火车站里很干净也有很多饭馆和副食商店。我买了一些小吃然后坐了为了等我们的火车。 在火车我们很快找到了我们的床(我们有了“Soft Sleeper“的票)。 我们的床很舒服和干净和我们的同屋很好的人。 在我看来我可以肯定推荐中国的火车! 再见! Typed - 30 minutes *** (Roughly translated into Chenglish as pretty sure my Chinese is ropey!) Hello friends! This time I‘m typing this journal entry to you from Xi'an. Today I want to tell you about my experience of Chinese trains. Yesterday we took the train to Xi-an, in total an 11 hour journey. I am always amazed by train stations in China. Chinese train stations are much much bigger than English train stations. There are always a huge number of people but they are extremely well organised/run. Yesterday my girlfriend and I arrived at Chengdu station a little early as we heard that you often have to queue. On the contrary, we were surprised as we were able to collect our tickets very quickly. The inside of the train station was very clean and there were also lots of restaurants and grocery stores. We bought a few snacks and then sat down to wait for our train. On the train, we quickly found our beds (we had "Soft Sleeper" tickets). Out beds were very comfortable and clean and our room mates were great people! In my opinion I can definitely recommend the trains in China. See you later!

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150521 - 在西安打字的自己:中国的火车

朋友们你们好!我在西安给你们打字(因为我今天没带纸!)

今天我要告诉你们的是我在中国坐火车的经历。昨天我们坐火车去西安,一共是十一小时的旅程。

中国的火车站让我感到很震惊!中国的火车站比英国的火车站大很多!虽然乘客非常多但是秩序井然。

昨天我和我的女朋友早一点来到了成都的火车站,因为我听说常常需要排队。不过让我们吃惊的是我们很快就检票了。

火车站里很干净,有很多饭馆和副食商店。我买了一些小吃,然后坐上了火车。

在火车上,我们很快找到了我们的位置(我们买的是“Soft Sleeper“软卧的票)。

卧铺很舒服和干净,和我们同屋的是很好的人。

中国的火车很赞!

再见!

Typed - 30 minutes

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(Roughly translated into Chenglish as pretty sure my Chinese is ropey!)

Hello friends! This time I‘m typing this journal entry to you from Xi'an.

Today I want to tell you about my experience of Chinese trains. Yesterday we took the train to Xi-an, in total an 11 hour journey.

I am always amazed by train stations in China. Chinese train stations are much much bigger than English train stations. There are always a huge number of people but they are extremely well organised/run.

Yesterday my girlfriend and I arrived at Chengdu station a little early as we heard that you often have to queue. On the contrary, we were surprised as we were able to collect our tickets very quickly.

The inside of the train station was very clean and there were also lots of restaurants and grocery stores. We bought a few snacks and then sat down to wait for our train.

On the train, we quickly found our beds (we had "Soft Sleeper" tickets).

Out beds were very comfortable and clean and our room mates were great people!

In my opinion I can definitely recommend the trains in China.

See you later!

我很高兴看到你的这篇文章,让我感到很自豪。Thank you very much. 

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150521 - 在西安打字的自己:中国的火车

你好朋友们!我这次在西安给你们写打字的自己 (我今天没有纸!)

今天我要告诉你我在中文国乘火车的经验。昨天我们座坐了火车去西安了,一共一个十一个小时张的旅游。

我被中国的火车站总是让我很震惊!中国的火车站比英国的火车站了不起大很多!总是有非常多的人,不过它们很好很通条畅。

昨天我和我女朋友提前来到了成都的火车站一点儿早,因为我们听说了你们经常必须不得不排队。不过我们惊奇的是了因为我们可以捡我们的检票很快。

火车站里很干净也有很多饭馆和副食商店。我买了一些小吃,然后坐了为了着等我们的火车。

在火车上我们很快找到了我们的床(我们有了“Soft Sleeper“的票,我们有软卧车票)。

我们的床很舒服,也和干净,和我们的同屋是很好的人。

在我看来,我可以肯定推荐中国的火车! (not wrong, but Chinese say "在我看来,中国的火车绝对值得推荐!")

再见!

Typed - 30 minutes

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(Roughly translated into Chenglish as pretty sure my Chinese is ropey!)

Hello friends! This time I‘m typing this journal entry to you from Xi'an.

Today I want to tell you about my experience of Chinese trains. Yesterday we took the train to Xi-an, in total an 11 hour journey.

I am always amazed by train stations in China. Chinese train stations are much much bigger than English train stations. There are always a huge number of people but they are extremely well organised/run.

Yesterday my girlfriend and I arrived at Chengdu station a little early as we heard that you often have to queue. On the contrary, we were surprised as we were able to collect our tickets very quickly.

The inside of the train station was very clean and there were also lots of restaurants and grocery stores. We bought a few snacks and then sat down to wait for our train.

On the train, we quickly found our beds (we had "Soft Sleeper" tickets).

Out beds were very comfortable and clean and our room mates were great people!

In my opinion I can definitely recommend the trains in China.

See you later!

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150521 - 在西安打字的自己:中国的火车

你好朋友们!我这次在西安给你们写打字的自己 (我今天没有纸!)

今天我要告诉你我在中文火车的经验。昨天我们坐了火车去西安,一次十一小时的旅游。

我总是被中国的火车站震惊!中国的火车站比英国的火车站大了好多!这儿总有非常多的人,不过都井然有序的。

昨天我和我女朋友早一点来到了成都火车站因为我们听说了你必须排队。然而我们都很吃惊,因为我们很快的检了我们的票。

火车站里很干净也有很多饭馆和副食商店。我买了一些小吃然后坐着等我们的火车。

在火车上我们很快找到了我们的床铺(我们有了“Soft Sleeper(软卧)“的票)。

我们的床很舒服很干净,和我们的同屋的人都很好。

我个人觉得,我可以完全推荐中国的火车!

再见!

Typed - 30 minutes

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(Roughly translated into Chenglish as pretty sure my Chinese is ropey!)

Hello friends! This time I‘m typing this journal entry to you from Xi'an.

Today I want to tell you about my experience of Chinese trains. Yesterday we took the train to Xi-an, in total an 11 hour journey.

I am always amazed by train stations in China. Chinese train stations are much much bigger than English train stations. There are always a huge number of people but they are extremely well organised/run.

Yesterday my girlfriend and I arrived at Chengdu station a little early as we heard that you often have to queue. On the contrary, we were surprised as we were able to collect our tickets very quickly.

The inside of the train station was very clean and there were also lots of restaurants and grocery stores. We bought a few snacks and then sat down to wait for our train.

On the train, we quickly found our beds (we had "Soft Sleeper" tickets).

Out beds were very comfortable and clean and our room mates were great people!

In my opinion I can definitely recommend the trains in China.

See you later!

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中国火车现在比以前好多了。但就是人多没办法啊。

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