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Rhymes, lines, smiles, all the times Sometime ago the Brazilian music style used to be more smart. Now most of singers just repeat some sounds in words and make musics from it. It's funny, lovely, but sometimes is very stupid. I won't make a list of the singers that sing this kind of music because I don't think I have wisdom to judge them, it's just my opinion about the lyrics. There is a singer I used listening his songs. These songs are very smart. His name is "Gabriel O Pensador". He uses rhymes and rhythms in an amazing way. While I was writing this text I was listening to "Linhas Tortas" (if you want to check it out: http://www.kboing.com.br/gabriel-o-pensador/1-1222044/) at that music he says something about his parents, life and one of the most important thing to him: Portuguese. He loves to write lyrics and surfing, but about surfing you won't listening to him talking about it. I know that because I watched an interview where he said his love for surfing. He is very smart and his musics are very famous in Brazil. Now people are more interested in musics with no much lyrics, but more dancing rhythm. There are sort of musics suit time better than others. If you are listening to musics by your self I do recommend "Gabriel O Pensador", but if you are in a party, for instance, dancing rhythms are better.

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Rhymes, lines, smiles, all the times

Sometime ago the Brazilian music style used to be more smarter (what do you mean by smart? Some other words I can think of are deep, insightful, have more meaning). Now most of singers just repeat some sounds in words and make musics from it.
It's funny, lovely, but sometimes it is very stupid.
I won't make a list of the singers that sing this kind of music because I don't think I have the wisdom to judge them, it's just my opinion of about the lyrics.
There is a singer I used to listen to listening his songs. These songs are very smart. His name is "Gabriel O Pensador". He uses rhymes and rhythms in an amazing way. While I was writing this text I was listening to "Linhas Tortas" (if you want to check it out: http://www.kboing.com.br/gabriel-o-pensador/1-1222044/). In at that song music he says something about his parents, life and one of the most important things to him: Portuguese. He loves to write lyrics and to surf (since you used to write, you have to maintain that tense), but about surfing you won't listening to hear him talking about it. I know that because I watched an interview where he mentioned said his love for surfing. He is very smart and his songs musics are very famous in Brazil.
Now people are more interested in musics with not much lyrics, but more dancing rhythm. There are sorts of musics that suit time better than others (This phrasing is a bit awkward. I would say something like: "There are some types of music that suit some occasions better than others"). If you are listening to musics by your self I do recommend "Gabriel O Pensador", but if you are in a party, for instance, songs with a good dancing rhythms are better.

 

Great job on this text! I am definitely checking out Gabriel O Pensador. It is awesome that you practice your writing so often. 

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