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Long Hot Day Hi everyone ^^ This time i'm just going to write about my day ^^ It was a really long exhausted day and can i mention that it was very hot outside . I felt like i'm melting >< I went to university cause i had a final exam . It went pretty well even though i had some mistakes , and now it's time for playing games , tell me what's your mmorpg games you played before or you playing now ?

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Long Hot Day

Hi everyone ^^

This time I'm just going to write about my day ^^
It was a really long exhausting day and can I mention that it was very hot outside? 
I felt like I was melting ><

I went to university because I had a final exam. It went pretty well even though I had some mistakes. Now it's time for playing games. Tell me, what are the mmorpg games that you have played before or are playing now?

 

Don't forget to write i as I! 

I've made your sentences shorter rather than using so many commas. It's a personal thing but I think that it makes it easier to read. Don't be afraid of using short sentences. They're fun!

I have played loads of MMORPG games. The list is too long! At the moment I'm playing Italki and Duolingo hehe (bad joke). I've played WOW, AoC, CoH, TOR + loads more. I don't have enough time to play any more!

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Long Hot Day

Hi everyone ^^

This time i'm just going to write about my day ^^
It was a really long exhaustinged day, and can I mention that it was very hot outside ?* 
I felt *like I'm melting ><

I went to university because I had a final exam . It went pretty well, even though I made had some mistakes, and now it's time for playing games. Tell me what's are your *[mmorpg] games that you played before or you are playing now ?

* 'can I . .  ?'  makes it a question

*I felt as though I was melting

*mmorpg  ??

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