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Long Hot Day
Hi everyone ^^
This time I'm just going to write about my day ^^
It was a really long exhausting day and can I mention that it was very hot outside?
I felt like I was melting ><
I went to university because I had a final exam. It went pretty well even though I had some mistakes. Now it's time for playing games. Tell me, what are the mmorpg games that you have played before or are playing now?
Don't forget to write i as I!
I've made your sentences shorter rather than using so many commas. It's a personal thing but I think that it makes it easier to read. Don't be afraid of using short sentences. They're fun!
I have played loads of MMORPG games. The list is too long! At the moment I'm playing Italki and Duolingo hehe (bad joke). I've played WOW, AoC, CoH, TOR + loads more. I don't have enough time to play any more!
Long Hot Day
Hi everyone ^^
This time i'm just going to write about my day ^^
It was a really long exhaustinged day, and can I mention that it was very hot outside ?*
I felt *like I'm melting ><
I went to university because I had a final exam . It went pretty well, even though I made had some mistakes, and now it's time for playing games. Tell me what's are your *[mmorpg] games that you played before or you are playing now ?
* 'can I . . ?' makes it a question
*I felt as though I was melting
*mmorpg ??
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