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my work task this morning,my boss ask we to have a meeting. he said that we should pulish at least two product information in weixin everyday, so we must add customers first. the information is write by us. now i don,t know how to write it for attract customers. is anybody have a good idea? if you have a good plan ,please tell me ,thank you.anyway , if you want to know my products ,i can introduce it to you . happy everyday to you.

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This morning our boss called a meeting. He said we should try to attract customers by publishing (?) advertising text on two products each day. Sentence construction confuses meaning in original. But what are your products? Perhaps we can help you write the text...
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My Work Task

This morning,my boss requested that we have a meeting. He said that we should pulish at least two pieces of information about products in weixin everyday. So, first, we must add customers. The information is written by us. Now i don,t know how to write it to attract customers. Does anybody have any good ideas? if you have a good plan, please tell me.  Thank you anyway!  If you want to hear about my products, I  can introduce them to you .

Have a great day!



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Hello dreamdanny, Why don't you try to write a product description yourself and post it here. There are lots of people willing to help.

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