Why some people want to kill themslefves ?
These days I heared some reakly bad and negative news,a girl jumped down from the tenth floor , she gave her mom a message online , called her best friend, then she just gone.No one noticed that the girl is unusual .She must feel life without hope , and she is tired of this life.
I am very sad to hear that news, she is just 20 years old, take a good college. now, we cant never see her, though I dont know her,in fact she is from another college close my college. Kill yourself really need more and more courage, especially jump off a building .
I dont know why she kill herself, and we should give more love and patience to people around.If you can give your love and make someone warm, why did you refuse it?
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Why some people want to kill themslefves Themselfs?
These days I heared some really bad and negative news,a girl jumped (down) from the tenth floor , she gave sent her mom a message online , called her best friend and then she just gone.No one noticed that the girl is was unusual .She must feel probably felt (her) life without hope , and she is was tired of this life.
I am very sad to hear that kind of news, she is was just 20 years old, take a good college. Now, we cant won't be ablet to see her, though I dont know her,in fact she is from another college close to my college. Kill yourself really need more and more courage, especially jump off a building .
I dont know why she kill herself, and we should give more love and patience to people around.If you can give your love and make someone warm, why did you refuse it?
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It's terrible!! ((((
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