Sexual addictions. Help please!

This is an exposé for an evaluation class. Need help.

Sexual addictions are among the least talked about and probably the least understood of all addictions. Sex can become a way of escaping from reality.
Sexual addiction is becoming recognized as a major social problem, like drug addiction. Society needs to change it's mindset about sexuality to understand sex addicts 
Nowadays, this disorder is unsettling most [--> nearly all?] people. People think sexual addictions are worse than bad habits. [--> aren't they bad habits too? What about "the worst bad habits"?] 

As we can see there are many types of sexual addiction.

I'm going to focus on two types: fantasy sex and voyeuristic sex

Fantasy sex is an obsession with sexual fantasy. This people prefer sexual fantasy than sexual relationships. 
The fantasies can be so intense and overwhelming that they are a major preoccupation for the individual involved. Fantasy is a way of escaping from reality.

Voyeuristic sex is considered paraphilia, that is sexual interest in atypical objects, situations or individuals. Voyeurism tends to be combined with excessive masturbation even to the point of injury. [ ! ] People who suffer this prefer solitary activities. For voyeuristic persons intimacy and love are not an option.

That was interesting! :)