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Entry #6: Greetings for to my father.
My father is a person who I really want love. I admire him because he is very smart. He knows about everything. When I question him about the definition of a word, he always answer to answers me. I keep looking for strange words which that he doesn't know, and I question him. He knows all the history of my country. I really like when he starts to relate what he knows.
About greetings. Once, when it was morning, I got up, and I went to the living room, and I greeted him with a "Hey you!". He didn't like that greeting and he was mad. (Having the "he" a second time in this sentence is not incorrect, but you could omit it as well.) I didn't understand why, but it was funny for me. The next day I said, "What's up?" and until that moment I never said "Good morning" as he likes. Now it is like a game. I greet him with in new ways and we just have fun with that (although sometimes he doesn't answer to me, haha).
Thanks for reading.
Entry #6: Greetings for to my father.
My father is a person who I really want love. I admire him because he is very smart. He knows about everything. When I question ask him about the definition of a word, he always answers to me. I keep looking for strange words which I think he doesn't know and I question to ask him. He knows all the history of my country. I really like when he start to relate what he knows. I really love his historical stories
About greetings. Once, when it was morning, I got up and I went to the living room and I greeted him with a by saying "Hey you!". He didn't like that greeting and he was mad. I didn't understand why but it was funny for me. Next day I said "What's up?" and until that moment I never said "Good morning", as he liked. Now it is like a game, I greet him with new ways and we just have fun with that (Although sometimes he doesn't answer to me haha).
Thanks for reading.
p/s: I am sure that you have a great sense of humor :D
remember:
- answer me ( not answer to me)
- Ask him ( not queston him)
- "greet" is a verb
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