A short and improvised dialog
"What happened to your boyfriend?", I asked my friend Nicole who was reading quietly a newspaper on the sofa.
She sighed and looked at me. She seemed tired.
"Oh, do you mean David?", she said.
"Yes, David. You know that I never remembered his name".
"Well...", she looked through the window and saw me again. "You know he never came at my house?" I didn't responded immediately, so she continued talking. "He...he..."
"He betrayed or cuckold you?"
"No, James". She began to cry. "He''s dead. I saw him before he died. And he seemed different".
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A short and improvised dialog
"What happened to your boyfriend?", I asked my friend Nicole who was quietly reading quietly a newspaper on the sofa.
She sighed and looked at me. She seemed tired.
"Oh, do you mean David?", she said.
"Yes, David. You know that I can never remember remembered his name".
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"Well...", she looked through the window and and then back at me saw me again. "You know he never came to/back to at my house?" I didn't responded immediately, so she continued talking. "He...he..."
"He betrayed (cheated on/left?) or cuckold** you?"
"No, James". She began to cry. "He''s dead. I saw him before he died., and he seemed different".
* With the different usages of past and present in this dialogue it's difficult for me to tell when certain events happened
** Meaning doesn't work here
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