Carp streamers
In Japan, we have custom of hanging out carp streamers on Children's Day to pray that boys in the house will take after carp and live their lives strongly. I went to Carp streamers festival two weeks ago. There were so many carp streamers.
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Carp streamers
In Japan, we have a custom of hanging out carp streamers on Children's Day to pray that boys in the house will take after the carp and live their lives strongly (with strength?). I went to the Carp streamers festival two weeks ago. There were so many (a lot of; many) carp streamers.
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Carp streamers
In Japan, we have a custom of hanging out carp streamers on Children's Day to pray that the boys in the house will take after the carp and live their lives in a strong way. I went to the Carp streamer festival two weeks ago. There were a lot of carp streamers.
Hello Hiromu,
I have made just a couple of corrections. In the last sentence, if you say 'There were so many carp streamers.' It sound like there is something missing from the end, so here it is bettert to say 'There were a lot of carp streamers'.
Hope this helps
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Wow, that's really cool! ^_^
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