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Growing up with good books
Reading is very important. We can gain knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us clever and happier. The more we read, the more we learn, and the brighter our life's future will become.
However,there are fewer and fewer people who like reading, they spend much time watching tv or playing computer games online. That is a way to kill time. So I would like to suggest people to read more books, so that we can spread our traditional Chinese culture to the world.
Pretty good effort, you only had a few mistakes. You used a lot of good grammar points!
You have to be careful with your capital letters, the first letter of a sentence is always a capital one. Also, after a full stop or a comma, you use a space before starting the next sentence.
Growing up with good books
Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It not only opens our minds,^ but also makes us clever and happier. The more we read , the more we learn, and the brighter our life future will become.However, there are fewer and fewer people who like reading. They spend much time in watching TV or playing computer games online. That is a way to kill time. So I would like to suggest that people read more books so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.
*Confucius say: 'Human mind like parachute: work best when open.'
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