Please correct this paragraph for me.
Tonight, I feel lonely in your arms.
After tonight, maybe I have to stop vague dreaming.
Am I wrong if I still miss you so much
But actually I do not want ours far away from each other
Am I wrong if I still hear your voice around at night
your mild flavor always in my mind
Because I am intransigent and always think that is true.
I kept wondering if memories can be blurred by the time
That I can not choose the dream for each other
Because I am being astral
Please honest, you really love me
Just call me, I will stay
Hold me please and say love me
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Sounds like a poem, and you look beautiful
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