Hi!!, can anybody correct me please?? I ´ll be happy if you will do it!! <3

When I was in the University, I worked as researcher in a project that provided free medicines for poor people, that project was sponsored for the national government, in one attempt to improve the healthcare in our country. 
At the beginning of the project, everything was difficult, nobody believed in the project, all opponents of the government were against of the project. They said   that the president, only was trying to get some votes for the next elections and he really didn’t (really) care about the health system in the country.

I felt upset about that, but I believed in myself, in my capacities and I believe I was in front of an opportunity to do something better for others, for those whose don’t have a place to live, don’t have nothing to eat or a bed for sleep.

I started talking with many NGOs, trying to find supporters, trying to find someone who might have my same thoughts, many doors were knocked on, and just a few were opened. I felt alone, but after three months of hard work we started to have results.

A journalist from another country, wrote a note about our job and the day after the news was published by a very famous news agency, the phones start to ring; it was amazing and unbelievable. We received call from all parts of the world such Venezuela, Chile, Mexico, China, Spain and Germany, a lot of people were interested in our work, and now ….now I´m feeling happy.

Hi!!, can anybody correct me please?? I ´ll be happy if you can do it!! <3

When I was in the University, I worked as researcher in a project related with free medicines for poor people, that project was sponsored by the national government, in one attempt to improve the health care in our country.
In the beginning of the project, everything was difficult, nobody believed in the project, all opponents of the government were against the project because they were saying that the president, only was trying to get some votes for the next elections and he really doesn’t care about the health system in the country.

I felt upset about that, but I believe in myself, in my capacities and I believe I was in front of an opportunity to do something better for others, for those who don't have a place to live, do have nothing to eat or a bed to sleep on.

I started talking with many NGOs, trying to find supporters, trying to find someone who have my own same thoughts, many doors were called, and just a few were opened. I felt alone, but after three months of hard work we started to have results.

A journalist from another country, wrote a note about our job and the day after, the news was published in a very famous news agency, the phones started to ring. That was amazing and unbeleivable. We received calls from all over the world such as Venezuela, Chile, Mexico, China, Spain and Germany, a lot of people were interested in our work, and now ….now I´m feeling happy.