Self-introduction at Spoken English Test

Hello teachers over there. My English name is Sophie. I’m a junior student and have majoring in Philosophy. Personally speaking, I think it’s a pretty cool major which can will open my mind and broaden my horizon. So I’d like to further my studies study and end up with a doctorate doctor degree so that I could get have the chance of becoming to be a professor in the future.
I’m a competitive person, but not overly so. I’d say the person I compete with most is myself. So I study hard to achieve  the goals I set for myself and try to be the best.
Besides studying, I have a wide range of interests and hobbies, such as like travelling and listening to music. The reason why I like travelling is it’s kinda like philosophy, it also broadens my horizon. which can widen my eyes. I find that listening to music relaxes me. As to music, i think it’s a great way to relax myself. My favorite musician is Taylor Swift. I guess that’s why I’m learning English so passionately just in the hope that I could meet her someday and even talk to her in fluent English. Thank you for listening.

Self-introduction at Spoken English Test

Hello everyone, (teachers over there.) my English name is Sophie. I’m a junior student whose major is (majored in) philosophy. Personally speaking, I think it’s a pretty cool major which can open my mind and broaden my horizons. So, I’d like to further my study and end up with a doctor degree so that I could get the chance to be a professor in the future.
I’m a competitive person, but not overly so. I’d say the person I compete with most is myself. So I study hard to achieve the goals I set for myself and try to be the best I can.
Besides study, I have a wide range of interests and hobbies, such as (like) travelling and listening to music. The reason why I like travelling is it’s similar to (kinda like) philosophy in that it (which) can broaden my outlook on life. (widen my eyes.)  As far as (to) music is concerned, I think it’s a great way to relax myself. My favorite/favourite musician is Taylor Swift. I guess that’s why I’m learning English so passionately just in the hope that I could meet her some day (someday) and even talk to her in fluent English. Thank you for listening.

Very impressive writing and your article flows naturally. Beware of phrases such as 'kinda' (I occasionally also see 'wanna') which are grammatically incorrect. Perhaps acceptable in US movies and text messages but not in written English. I have suggested a couple of typographical amendments to make it read a little better but otherwise perfect!