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We're in the Autumn During this season the flowers and trees become shy. The leafs are threw away. It is a sign we're in the Autumn. The wind take care of the leafs and use them to change the ground color. The kids go to the square to take a ride by bicycle through the leafs on the ground. The leafs moving so high because the bycicles wheel's wind and it is funny. It remembers my childhood. I enjoy looking to the partners sitted on the bench at the square. I appreciate go to the pizza place with my wife to have one of the delicious cheese pizza. When I got home I have an amazing chocolatte mug. There are no words to say how good it is. Chocolatte is the best company during these days. Although my country is a tropical country I like the Autumn and Winter as well. I never saw the snow and I don't know if I'll see it one day. One of the most beautiful things I appreciate during the cold season is the fashion clothes. Women take advantage of the season and they do pretty make up. I love to look them using their jackets, skull caps, long boots, scarfs. All of them prefer to use their hair long, even women that use tied hair change their mind during the cold seasons. Men use jackets too, nice shoes, jeans, caps. The people love to use perfume as well. Almost every person you stay close on streets have a good perfume. It is lovely season. I think the only creature doesn't like the cold season are the cats! Near my home there a lot of stray cats. They don't like this season, we can hear they screaming all night long, poor stray cats. Dogs have more resistance to the cold at least we don't hear they screaming like cats.

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We're in the Autumn/Fall

During this season, the flowers and trees become bare shy. The leaves are thrown away/fall from the trees. That is a sign we're in the Autumn.
The wind takes care of the leaves and uses them to change the ground color. The kids go to the square to take a bicycle ride by bicycle through the leaves on the ground. The leaves move ing so high because the bycicles wheels' push them away wind and it is funny. It reminds me of remembers my childhood.
I enjoy looking at the couples partners sitting ed on the benches at the square. I appreciate going to the pizza place with my wife to have one of their delicious cheese pizzas. When I get home I have an amazing cup of hot chocolatte mug. There are no words to say how good it is. Chocolate is the best company during these days. Although my country is a tropical country, I like the Autumn and Winter as well. I've never seen the snow and I don't know if I'll see it one day. One of the most beautiful things I appreciate during the cold season is the fashion clothes. Women take advantage of the season and they use do pretty make up. I love to look at them using their jackets, skull caps, long boots, scarfs. All of them prefer to use their hair long, even women that use tied hair change their mind during the cold seasons. Men use jackets too, nice shoes, jeans, and caps. The People love to use perfume as well. Almost every person you stay close on streets has have a nice good perfume. It is a lovely season. I think the only creature that doesn't like the cold season are the cats! Near my home there a lot of stray cats. They don't like this season, we can hear they screaming all night long, poor stray cats.
Dogs have more resistance to the cold or at least we don't hear them screaming like cats.

 

Good job!

1. Fall is used more commonly in American English.

2. People/animals can be shy, but plants are not usually referred to as shy. Maybe you meant bare (no leaves), dormant, or sad-looking?

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