Hotel introduction
Our hotel is allocated in Paddington area, the nearest tube stations are Lancaster gate with the central line and Paddington with the Bakerloo line. If you arrive early in the morning we can storage your luggage and you can come back after two o'clock, it is the checking hour.
How can I go to Victoria Station? Walk on the right until the big avenue called Edward Road and take the bus number 16 to Victoria Station, the bus terminate stop is in the door of the Station.
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Hotel Introduction
Our hotel is located in the Paddington area. The nearest tube stations are Lancaster gate with the Central line and Paddington with the Bakerloo line. If you arrive early in the morning, we can store your luggage until you come back after two o'clock for check-in.
How do I get to Victoria Station? Walk on the right to the big avenue, Edward Road. Then take bus #16 to Victoria Station. The bus's final stop is in the door of Victoria Station.
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Hotel introduction
Our hotel is located in the Paddington area, the nearest tube stations are Lancaster gate with on the Central Line and Paddington with on the Bakerloo line. If you arrive early in the morning, you can store your luggage and come back after two o'clock to check in.
How can I get to Victoria Station? Walk on the right until the big avenue called Edward Road and take bus number 16 to Victoria Station, the bus stop is in front of the station.
Hello Inmaculada.
Nice text, all understandable. Just a few corrections.
Your hotel is 'located' in the Paddington area, your room will be 'allocated' when you arrive.
We talk about stations being 'on' train lines.
I have reworded the highlighted conditional sentence to make it read more naturally.
Hope this helps
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