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The story of Sipel Sipel was a Kurdish girl. She was living in Duhok Iraq. She was very cleaver at her study during her student’s life. She got very high marks at national exam in secondary stage therefore she was able to join any faculty at university. Her parents wanted their daughter to be a doctor, but she liked French language very much and also she liked her parents very much too. According to her parent’s desires, she started to study at medicine faculty but she found out that the medicine faculty was very difficult. She did very badly at her new study. She failed at her first grade at medicine faculty. She lost one year of her age. One evening she sat down with her parents and stated to explain everything about her study and her future, how difficult is medicine faculty and she would not able to complete her study and to be a doctor. Her parents understood her new satiation very well. Finally, Sipel decided to study French language in Duhok University as she already liked French very well. She was able to make a big progress at her study. She was the most cleaver and active student at the faculty. At last she was graduated with very high marks, therefore the administration of University decided to send her to France to complete her French study there. She was very happy to go to France to complete her study and at the same time she was very sad to be away for her parents who she likes them very much too so she did not know what to do, to go to France or to stay with her parents.

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The story of Sipel

Sipel was a Kurdish girl. She was living in Duhok Iraq. She was very clever at her study during her student’s life. She got very high marks at national exam in secondary stage therefore she was able to join any faculty at a university. Her parents wanted their daughter to be a doctor, but she liked French language very much but she liked her parents very much too. Because of her parent’s desires, she started to study at medicine faculty but she found out that it was proven to be very difficult. She did very badly at her new study. She failed her first grade at medicine faculty. She lost one year of her age. One evening she sat down with her parents and started to explain everything about her study and her future, she explained how difficult the medicine faculty was and she would not able to complete her study to become a doctor. Her parents understood her new situation very well. Finally, Sipel decided to study French language in Duhok University as she already liked French very well. She was able to make a lot of progress at her study. She was the most clever and active student at the faculty. At last she graduated with very high marks, therefore the administration of University decided to send her to France to complete her French study there. She was very happy to go to France to complete her study and at the same time she was very sad to be away for her parents whom she also likes so she did not know what to do. Go to France or to stay with her parents.

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Thanks for reading the story and thanks for your comment.
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I detected my mistake to. I wanted to say think not thing :))
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I only detected one mistake but twice. I thing you were trying to say clever not cleaver.

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