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I went to hospital. Today morning I went to hospital for take a chest X-Ray.  I booked examination But I have waited a long time.  When nurse call my name already I lost a time.  I felt hungry Because I did't have breakfast. So when I finished examination I went to Japanese restaurant. I ordered pork cutlet and Japanese noodle. Very delicious.  At night I went to apple shop Because my mother need iPad air2.  So I bought iPad air2 for my mother.  She wanted to gold color and red Smart Cover.

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I went to the hospital.

Today This morning I went to the hospital for to get take a chest X-Ray. 
I booked an examination appointment, Bbut I havehad to wait for waited a long time.
When By the time the nurse called my name, I had already I lost a lot of time. 
I felt hungry Bbecause I did't hadn't had have breakfast., Sso when I finished the examination I went to a Japanese restaurant.
I ordered a pork cutlet and Japanese noodles.
It was Vvery delicious. 
At night I went to the apple shop store Bbecause my mother needed an iPad air 2. 
So I bought iPad air2 for my mother.  <This is repetitive, so it's unnecessary. It's assumed that you bought one since you said you went to the store for an ipad air 2.
She wanted a gold colored one with a and red Smart Cover.

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I went to the hospital.

This morning I went to the hospital to take a chest X-Ray. 
I booked an examination, but I have waited a long time.
 When the nurse called my name, I have already lost time. 
I felt hungry because I didn't have breakfast.
So, when I finished examination, I went to a Japanese restaurant.
I ordered pork cutlet and Japanese noodles.
It was very delicious. 
At night I went to the apple shop because my mother needed an iPad air2. 
So I bought a iPad air2 for my mother. 
She wanted the gold color and red Smart Cover.

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I went to hospital.

Today morning I went to hospital to take an X-ray of my chest. 
I booked an examination, but I have waited for a long time.
When the nurse called my name, I've already lost some time. 
I was hungry Because I didn't have breakfast.
So when I finished the examination I went to a Japanese restaurant.
I ordered a pork cutlet and a Japanese noodle.
It was very delicious. 
At night I went to an apple shop Because my mother needed an iPad air2. 
So I bought the iPad air2 for my mother. 
She wanted the gold color and red Smart Cover.

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