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My travel to Peru I will write about my travel to Peru. In 2010, I traveled to Peru. I met some cities: Lima, Cuzco, Puno and Machu Pichu. Peru is a fantastic country. Have a friendly people and interesting. The typical foods are delicious. One day, I will be back to meet others cities.

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My journey/trip to Peru

I will write about my traveltrip to Peru. In 2010, I traveled to Peru. I metvisited some cities: Lima, Cuzco, Puno and Machu Pichu. Peru is a fantastic country. Have a friendly people The people are very friendly and interesting. Their typical foods are delicious. One day, I will be go back to visit others cities.

 

**travel é um verbo, o sustantivo é 'journey' ou 'trip'. 'Journey' é mais formal e é mais com a ideia de uma viagem muito longa. 'Trip' é mais colloquial e usual, e é mais para as férias.

 

**O verbo 'meet' é usado só para dizer que conhecimos a uma pessoa. 

 

**A ordem da frase é um pouco portuglish mas entendi o que quisse dizer. Esta seria a maneira correcta para dize-lo. 

 

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In general, very good use of vocabulary and grammar. Well done :D

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