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Happyily reading the novel
The novel which that I'm reading is about one unlucky girl who has a cancer disease in her lung lung cancer. She have to joins the a cheerful club, held at a which is the religious place for supporting herself from her mom's telling-???. Then she meets some boys who is have the same characters as her. And...I'm drowsy now now I'm drowsy; when I read it next chapter I will tell it to you to be continued (the last crossed sentence was really awkward, but I understood your sentiment. Instead, write I will soon make another post detailing the next chapter.) #practice #reading #novel
On a side note, don't write any hashtags in a notebook entry! You normally see them only on social medita like facebook and twitter, because they actually serve a specific function, but when you use them on another site such as italki, it's just weird. Don't abuse the hashtag!
Also, despite the several flaws in your entry, I understood almost all of it, so good job! The only thing I didn't get is highlighted in red.
Happy reading!
The novel that I'm currently reading is about one unlucky girl who has lung cancer. She has to join the 'cheerful club' which is a religious support group from her mom's telling (sorry, I don't understand this bit). Then she meets some boys who are in the same situation as her. And...I'm drowsy now when I read the next chapter I will tell it to you, to be continued. #practice #reading #novel
BTW - does she 'have to' join this group? If so why? Who makes her? Does she want to be there? I'm intrigued!
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