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My Love of (to) English
I am a girl who is easy going (,) and cheerful. In my spare time, I love .. to learn / learning ...English (,) and really feel it is exciting to speak with others in English. (with others.) / I really feel excited when I speak with others in English. I love making new friends and sharing life experiences. (to share life together.) I really hope I can make more friends on this (the) forum.
Good introduction. You should say 'love of' not 'to'. In your first sentence you can use the conjunction 'and' to replace the comma. That apart,I have just suggested a few amendments to improve the text a little.
My love for English
I am a girl who is easy going and cheerful. In my spare time, I love to learning English. and I'm really excited to speak English with others. I love making new friends, to share life together. I really hope I can make more friends on this forum.
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