Entry #3: A good experience

The last year I saw an ad on the newspaper. It was writing to people who wants to change their community. They were going to selected 6 people, gave a trip to another country for learn with entrepreneurs and help with the projects in the communities. I thought "Why not? I am going to try". There were three steps for the selection of people. First, I had to do several tests. In November I went to a college for the tests and when I was there I saw really smart people and I doubted about me.

A month later I had to fill in a form. I didn't have great expectations. A week later they called me, they told me that I could go to the next step. I was very excited, it was the next to last step! We went to camp to a beautiful place. There, we had fun and more tests. I met really nice people, everybody made great things in their communities. They were only two days but they were the best. I was not selected but that was a good experience.

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Entry #3: A good experience
The last year I saw an ad in the newspaper. It was writing to people who want to change their community. They were going to selected 6 people and give them a trip to another country to learn from entrepreneurs and help them with the projects in the communities. I thought "Why not? I am going to try". There were three steps for the selection of people. First, I had to take several tests. In November, I went to a college for the tests and when I was there I saw really smart people and I doubted about myself.

A month later I had to fill out a form. I didn't have great expectations. A week later they called me, they told me that I could move on to the next step. I was very excited, it was the next to last step! We went to camp at a beautiful place. There, we had fun and more tests. I met really nice people, everybody did great things in their communities. It was only two days, but they were the best. I was not selected but it was a good experience.

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Entry #3: A good experience

Last year I saw an ad in the newspaper. It was writing to people who wants to change their community. They were going to selected 6 people, and give them a trip to another country to learn with entrepreneurs and help with the projects in the communities. I thought "Why not? I am going to try." There were three steps for the selection of people. First, I had to do several tests. In November I went to a college for the tests and when I was there I saw really smart people and I doubted myself.

A month later I had to fill in a form. I didn't have great expectations. A week later they called me and told me that I could go to the next step. I was very excited as it was the next to last step! We went to camp in a beautiful place. There, we had fun and more tests. I met really nice people; everybody made great things in their communities. They were only two days but they were the best. I was not selected, but it was still a good experience.