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Strawberries My nephew's son is now 27 months old. Living with us in the same house, he makes us laugh at his cute actions all the time. One of his favorite drinks is blended strawberries. Yesterday, we intended to have strawberry juice for dessert, notably for him. We went around some markets to buy strawberries, but no one sold them yesterday. I tried to look for it from some fruit supermarkets in the afternoon, but my attempts didn't help at all. Today, I didn't give up buying it for him. I went to work at the clinic today. Besides the clinic, there is a luxurious supermarket where some foreign food and ingredients are sold. I called my sister to ask whether or not she found it this morning. She replied that she purchased it already. In my life, perhaps I try to be frugal with myself, but for the ones I love, I willingly sacrifice myself to them. I don't mean that I am so generous, but I want to give my real love to others because there is more happiness than there is in receiving.

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Strawberries

My nephew's son is now 27 months old. Living with us in the same house, he makes us laugh at his cute actions all the time.
One of his favorite drinks is blended strawberries. Yesterday, we intended to have strawberry juice for dessert, notably especially for him. We went around some markets to buy strawberries, but no one sold them yesterday.

I tried to look for it from some fruit supermarkets in the afternoon, but my attempts didn't help at all. Today, I didn't give up buying it for him. I went to work at the clinic today. Besides the clinic, there is a luxurious supermarket where some foreign food and ingredients are sold. I called my sister to ask whether or not she found it this morning. She replied that she purchased it already.

In my life, perhaps I try to be frugal with myself, but for the ones I love, I willingly sacrifice myself to them. I don't mean that I am so generous, but I want to give my real love to others because there is more happiness than there is in receiving.

 

notably is rarely used, I would avoid it.

I just simplified, removed redundant 'yesterday' and 'today'

 

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My nephew's son is now 27 months old. Living with us in the same house, he makes us laugh at his cute actions all the time. 

One of his favorite drinks is blended strawberries. Yesterday, we intended to have strawberry juice for dessert, notably for him. We went to some markets to buy strawberries, but no one sold them yesterday.

I tried to look for them from some fruit supermarkets in the afternoon, but my attempts didn't help at all. Today, I didn't give up buying them for him. I went to work at the clinic today. Beside the clinic, there is a luxurious supermarket where some foreign food and ingredients are sold. I called my sister to ask whether or not she found strawberries this morning. She replied that she purchased them already. 


In my life, perhaps I try to be frugal with myself, but for the ones I love, I willingly sacrifice for them. I don't mean that I am so generous, but I want to give my real love to others because there is more happiness giving than receiving.

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