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Do you love your pets so much? Whenever you feel alone and there is no someone next to you, pets usually makes you feel better. Pets is our best friend because he always be our side in any condition. But, have ever you seen there are some people who treat their pets like their own child? I think that could be categorized as a misspreception. Human are social creatures who need someone to play with. Because they live far away from their friends or relatives, they search another thing to satisfy their social soul. Most of them choose pets rather than having a long distance interraction with their friends. Someone need an existence, so with no people around him, he look for an alternative way. Sometime that behaviour could be dangerous if they can not control their emotions. They could abandon their children because they love the pets more. In this case, children lack of attention from their parent and can caused mentality disorder both to the children and parent. So, be careful. Love things as normal as you can because you have to manage your emotions to whom deserved. *please correct my writing :)

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Do you love your pets too much?

Whenever you feel alone and there is no one next to you, pets usually makes you feel better. Pets are our best friends because they are always by our side in any situation. But, have ever you seen people who treat their pets like their own child? I think that could be categorized as a delusion.

Humans are social creatures who need someone to interact with. If someone lives far away from their friends or relatives, they search for another thing to satisfy their social soul. Many people choose pets rather than having a long distance relationship with their friends. People need a social life, so with no people around them, they look for an alternative.

Sometimes that behaviour could be dangerous if they can not control their emotions. They could abandon their children because they love their pets more. In this case, the childrens lack of attention from their parent and can caused a mentality disorder both in the children and parent. So, be careful. Love your pets as normally as you can because you have to manage your emotions love whom ever is most deserving.

*please correct my writing :)

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